Unit 1: Better Writing Using Personal Experiences

Outcomes

• use your students’ personal experiences and the local environment to develop students’ writing skills,

• help students improve their grammatical and communicative competence by practising writing about familiar people and events,

• inspire your students to develop their creative thinking and imagination, and

• help enhance students’ active vocabulary for describing people and events.

Terminology

Active vocabulary:

Active vocabulary comprises words and phrases that one uses regularly in one’s speech and writing. Passive vocabulary, on the other hand, describes the vocabulary that one recognises and understands in other people’s speech and in writing, but does not use oneself.

Autobiography:

An autobiography is a written account of somebody’s life written by himself or herself.

Narrative:

A piece of written or oral text that describes an event in a chronological order. A narrative usually has a clear beginning, middle and end, and may include conversations and descriptions. Stories, novels and ballads are all examples of narratives.

Case study

Mr Amani Hamis, Mr John Katale and Ms Sara Samson are teachers at three different secondary schools in Tanzania.

Recently, the three teachers participated in a professional development workshop on teaching English. One of their assignments involved working on a group mini-project on teaching effective writing to students who are in their early years of secondary education.

The group members discovered that they had all been using the students’ familiar contexts in designing writing assignments. They agreed that describing people, events, things, emotions and situations always stimulates students’ interest in writing lessons. They decided to brainstorm on the activities that assisted them in their teaching.

Mr Hamis described the strategy he used. At the beginning of the activity, he usually did a “show and tell” routine. He asked the students to bring to the class something they wanted to describe. Each student showed his or her item and described it. Meanwhile the teacher wrote on the board the keywords used by the students in the description. A different student would then be asked to write a description of the object using those words. The students were then encouraged to put their descriptions on the display board.

Sara and John used similar strategies in their classrooms, but since their class size was bigger, both preferred putting students in groups for this activity. In their groups, students would be asked to decide on an object to describe. Each group member then wrote a sentence describing the object. The group sequenced the sentences and edited them, and one group member presented the final description.

John added that, to encourage healthy competition, he had the class judge the presentations, and the best two descriptions were displayed in the class every week. When the teachers presented their group report, the workshop participants agreed that this was a good way of motivating students to communicate spontaneously. They suggested, however, that the teacher needed to intervene before the presentations were displayed, so that students learned how to edit their written work for grammar and style.

Points to ponder

1. Have you attended any professional development courses? Did you learn some techniques there that could be adopted in your classroom?

2. Do you think encouraging students to discuss or describe things from their own lives is a good strategy to develop language skills? Why?

Activity 1

1. Describing oneself and one’s family can be an exciting activity for both students and the teacher. However, you need to prepare for it. Before carrying out this activity read Resource 2: Using brainstorming/mind maps.

Hand your students a sheet with pictures of two people on it (see Resource 5). (If you have access to an overhead projector, you can put the pictures on the screen instead.) Tell them that one of the people in the picture has escaped from jail, and the police are looking for him. Have a general discussion on what each person in the picture looks like, so that they can be described accurately to the police. Practise key vocabulary related to physical features (Resource 4).

Now ask the students to listen carefully to the description of the prisoner in the news report in Resource 3, and then identify him from the photographs in Resource 5.

2. Have a general feedback discussion on how they managed to identify the prisoner from the description in the audio, reminding them that it was certain words that helped them to identify the man. Distribute the transcript of the audio for their reference.

Now put your students in pairs and announce that they are going to play a guessing game. They are to write a description of their partner. Instruct them not to write down the name of the person they are describing, as the game is to guess the person from the nameless description. Tell them their descriptions will be collected and jumbled up, and then you will read each one aloud.

The class has to identify the classmate described. The more accurate the description and the sooner the person is identified correctly, the more points the writer is awarded. As an incentive, you could announce that there will be a prize for the most accurate descriptions.

To prepare for the task, tell the students to use words from the list in Resource 4. Remind them that their descriptions should contain information about their partner’s general height and build, and also details of their face, and any other noticeable marks, such as a birthmark. Ask the students to edit their work. Advise them to use a dictionary to check the spellings of words that they are not sure of, and to make any necessary corrections.

Activity 2

We all have events we remember because they were exciting, interesting or appealing to us; they may be historical, cultural, scientific or topical. In this activity, students will learn how to write a narrative passage on events of their choice.

As a pre-task activity, show the students the video in Resource 6. Then ask them to narrate from memory the sequence of the events described. Play the video once more to let them check that they can narrate the events in the correct order and with all the details. Draw their attention to linkers such as firstly, then, after that, meanwhile, in the end and so on. Explain that these linking words are like signposts, helping the reader to move through the passage easily. They also help to keep the reader interested in following the events.

1. Ask the class to name five or six recent school events that they enjoyed (sports day, annual day, visit of a guest, etc.). Divide the students into groups of five or six, and let each group choose one event to narrate. Have them brainstorm on the most important parts of the event they would like to include.

2. The next step is to arrange the parts in a chronological order (i.e., beginning with the earliest part).

3. Each group then writes a first draft. Encourage them to use linkers in their passages to make their passage easy to read and interesting to follow.

4. The group then re-reads the passage and checks for errors in spelling, grammar or facts. One group member then reads out the narrative to the class. After each presentation you can discuss any mistakes so that the groups can revise their texts.

5. The groups then write their final drafts and submit them.

Activity 3

One activity that appeals to all of us is talking about ourselves. Keeping a diary is a good way of recording our personal experiences. A diary is different from a journal entry or a log, because it is not a mere record of events. In a diary we express our innermost thoughts and feelings. At the JSS level, students are entering adolescence, which is a stage of life in which they are naturally self-absorbed. As teachers, we can use this factor to encourage students to practise their writing skills through diary entries.

1. Ask your students if they have heard of Anne Frank. Have a general discussion with them about Anne Frank’s life and how she sustained herself in those difficult days, especially as an adolescent. (See Resource 7 for a photograph of Anne Frank’s diary.)

2. Now discuss with them the habit of maintaining a diary. Ask them to work in pairs to list the advantages and disadvantages of diary writing, if any. This pre-task will help them brainstorm on diary entries in general.

3. Now distribute a handout containing three sample diary entries in different styles (see Resource 8). Ask the students, working in groups, to discuss and note the differences between a story and a diary entry.

4. Using the samples as a guide, encourage them to list the sections in a diary entry: where to write the date, the personal address form “Dear Diary,” the introduction, body of the text and ending.

5. Finally, ask them to write their own diary entries for that day. Encourage them to revise their drafts to check for spelling, grammar, tense and style. Refer to Resource 9: Guidelines on diary entries.

Summary

In this unit you learned how to use the experiences and local context of your students to teach writing skills, and that description can create a familiar context upon which students can base their writing. Group work can be a good way to manage large classes. Always check students’ spelling and grammar at the end of the exercises.

Reflection

• In what way was the unit useful to you?

• Did you try out the activities suggested in this module? If not, what could have been the reason? If yes, was your lesson successful?

Assessment

• What would you have done differently to make the activities more effective?

• In a big class, how would you make sure that each student’s spelling and grammar are correct?

Resource 1

What group work does

Group work can be a very effective way of motivating pupils to learn by encouraging them to think, communicate, exchange ideas and thoughts, and take decisions. In groups, pupils can both teach others and learn from each other in ways that result in a powerful and active form of learning.

When to do group work

Group work can be used:

• at the start of a lesson or topic, to find out what pupils already know;

• during a lesson, to encourage understanding or to share views and opinions about a topic;

• at the end of a lesson, to help pupils think about their learning and be clear about what they know and what they still need to understand.

• Before you start

  • Before starting a group session, be clear about what you want to achieve from it. It needs to have a clear purpose or objective. For example: ‘By the end of the session we will be able to describe how rain is formed and what it does to our local landscape.’

  • Divide the class into manageable groups depending on the size of your class, but don’t make them too large — everyone needs to be able to contribute. You may have to move furniture or perhaps have some groups outside.

  • Give each individual a job to do in the group. These could include: recorder of what’s said; organizer; devil’s advocate; peacekeeper; spokesperson; link person with other groups.

  • Decide ways in which you will divide pupils into groups. You could use friend groups, put people with similar interests together, have similar ability groups, mixed ability groups — or have no category at all. Which one will work best in the situation you are planning?

  • Plan enough time for the pupils to reach a conclusion as well as time at the end of the session for each group — and you — to summarize the conclusions.

Introducing the group work: Once pupils are in their groups, explain that working together to solve a problem or reach a decision is an important part of their learning and personal development.

From: KR_HO_Using_group_work_in_your_classroom.doc (http://www
.tessafrica.net)

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Resource 2

What is brainstorming?

Brainstorming is a group activity that generates as many ideas as possible on a specific issue or problem, then decides which idea(s) offer(s) the best solution. It involves creative thinking by the group to think of new ideas to address the issue or problem they are faced with. Brainstorming helps pupils to:

• understand a new topic;

• generate different ways to solve a problem;

• be excited by a new concept or idea;

• feel involved in a group activity that reaches agreement.

How to set up a brainstorming session:

Before starting a session, you need to identify a clear issue or problem. This can range from a simple word like ‘energy’ and what it means to the group, or something like ‘How can we develop our school environment?’

To set up a good brainstorming session, it is essential to have a word, question or problem that the group is likely to respond to. In very large classes, questions can be different for different groups. Groups should be as varied as possible in terms of gender and ability. There needs to be a large sheet of paper that all can see in a group of between six and eight pupils. The ideas of the group need to be recorded as the session progresses so that everyone knows what has been said and can build on or add to earlier ideas. Every idea must be written down, however unusual.

Before the session begins, the following rules are made clear:

1. Everyone in the group must be involved.

2. No one criticizes anyone else’s ideas or suggestions.

3. Unusual and innovative ideas are welcomed.

4. Lots of different ideas are needed.

5. Everyone needs to work quickly. Brainstorming is a fast activity.

Running the session

The teacher’s role initially is to encourage discussion, involvement and the recording of ideas. When pupils begin to struggle for ideas, or time is up, get the group (or groups) to select their best three ideas and say why they have chosen these.

Finally:

• summarise for the class what they have done well;

• ask them what they found useful about their activity. What did they discover in the brainstorming that they didn’t realise before?

What is mind mapping?

Mind mapping is a way of representing key aspects of a central topic. Mind maps are visual tools to help pupils structure and organise their own thinking about a concept or topic. A mind map reduces large amounts of information into an easy-to-understand diagram that shows the relationships and patterns between different aspects of the topic.

When to use a mind map

• A mind map is useful when you want to encourage creativity as its structure encourages free thinking.

• When trying to solve a problem, a mind map helps to highlight the aspects of the problem and how they relate to one another.

• A mind map can help to revise previous work with a class — quickly and in an organised way.

• Use mind maps when you want to encourage discussion, variety, experimentation and thinking in class groups.

How to make a mind map

• Begin by drawing a box in the centre of a piece of paper. Write in it the main theme, topic or idea you are going to represent.

• Make branches from the main box that have sub-themes associated with the main theme.

• Be creative with your basic map, adding in ideas around your sub-themes.

• Try a mind map out on your own before trying it with your class. You could use it as a demonstration.

From: TESSA Key resource: Using Brainstorming/Mind-maps Technique (www.tessafrica.net).

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Resource 3

Transcript

A notorious thief escaped from Central Jail last night through a hole in a broken part of the old wall, Police Commissioner Smith informed our correspondent. A red alert has been sounded in the city, and the public has been warned to keep their doors securely locked at night.

A reward of 50,000 dollars has also been announced for any information on the escaped convict, who has been identified as Anthony Carlos. When he escaped, Anthony was in prison uniform. Here is the official description given by headquarters to our news desk. Anthony is about 5 feet 2 inches tall, with a round face, bulging eyes and a broad nose. He is about 35 years of age, bald and with a long scar across his forehead. He also has a thin moustache. The public has been requested to inform the police immediately if the thief is seen in their locality. The emergency numbers 100 and 101 will be open for the public 24 hours a day, police sources added.

Video

Resource file

See in the enclosed DVD a video recording of the activity:

• Scripts\Module4\Unit 1\Activity 1\Resource 3\Video\A_Reporters_Story.mp4

Audio

• http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQeI7qo1usM

If you have trouble playing the video, you can have your students listen to the audio recording (below) of the same conversation:

• Scripts\Module4\Unit 1\Activity1\Resource 3\Audio\A_Reporters_Story.mp3

Resource 4

Face: round/oval-shaped/square/pointed/triangular/
angular/large

Hair: straight/wavy/curly/silky/shoulder-length/bald/ thinning/grey/pepper-and-salt

Eyes: round/almond-shaped/small/large/soft/bulging/narrow/
wide/Oriental/light

Complexion: fair/dark/dusky/light/rough/pale/sallow/sickly

Nose: sharp/pointed/broad/small/flat/thin/large/hooked/flaring nostrils

Other marks: mole/birthmark/scar/spot

Body shape: thin/slim/stout/overweight/fat/angular/V-shaped

Lips: thin/shapely/broad/bow-shaped/wide/pouting/full/ cracked

Resource 5

Resource 6

Transcript

Good morning! Here are the news headlines for today. First, the national news. In our next section, we have a report coming in from Westlands. Four people perished in a grisly car crash along Waiyaki Way when a saloon car collided with an oncoming lorry in the wee hours of this morning. Our reporter Amos Kubai has more on that…

…Traffic was brought to a standstill for several hours when a saloon car heading to town collided with a lorry along Waiyaki Way, killing all four passengers on board. According to eye witnesses, the lorry belonging to a city dairy company lost control and then swerved onto the wrong lane, ramming into the saloon car. After the accident, the lorry driver and his turn-boy, who were unhurt, took off and the police are still on their trail. Incidentally, this is the third accident to take place along the route this week. Previous incidents, 15 people lost their lives, including seven members of the same family.

Meanwhile, Nairobi area traffic commandant Alfayo Muthee has called on all road users to adhere to the highway code and to also ensure that their vehicles are in good working condition to avoid road carnage. Amos Kubai reporting for News 54 in Nairobi.

Video

Resource file

See in the enclosed DVD a video recording of the activity:

• Scripts\Module4\Unit1\Activity2\Resource6\News_Report.mp4

Resource 7

Resource 8

Sample 1

Sample 2

Sample 3

Resource 9

• Write in the first person. A diary is a personal account of the events of a day or some hours in your life, so it is inappropriate to use the third person.

• In a diary we refer to events that have happened in our lives and to people who are in our lives.

• We disclose our innermost feelings in a diary, so a diary entry includes our emotions. In a diary we write about our feelings more than about facts.

• A diary has one particular point of view of events: our own. If we include other people’s comments or judgement, we do it from our own perspective.

• A diary is a keeper of secrets. That is why a diary is for our own eyes only — we rarely allow others to read our diaries.

• For more guidelines and activities on diary writing, visit the website www.kidsonthenet.com/adventureisland/teachers/worksheet_diary.pdf

Feedback

Question: In a large mixed ability class, when students are working in groups, how do I make sure that the slower learners are benefiting?

Answer: Make sure that the groups reflect the nature of your class. Groups should also be of mixed ability to ensure that the faster learners are assisting the slower ones. During group work make sure you move around to observe the participation in each group. Insist that every group member contribute at least one point to the discussion. When you pick some students’ work to read, make sure that you pick from students of varied abilities.